Inspirational Motivational Poem -- My Path In the Woods -- Carve Your Own Path -- Get Off the Beaten Path
Posted: Thursday, November 01, 2007
by Marty RicKard
MY PATH IN THE WOODS
I went for a walk
after the snow
and I knew others had been there before
for the path I was on
was well beaten down
and it held my attention
no more
For the path well-trod
leads to despair
and is surfaced with dusty schemes
The path I prefer
I'll carve it myself
and pave it with elegant dreams
Yes
I once walked there
on the path well-trod
but my footprints I never could find
for they were all mixed and mingled therein
with the others
I walked behind
So I left the path
and I walked in the woods
and when I turned I could see
the most beautiful trail there in the snow
created only by me
My trail wasn't straight
nor was it wide
it wandered where ever I pleased
but the beauty I saw
could never be seen
from that well-trod path through the trees
Alone in the woods
I shed a tear
and gave the Lord thanks that day
for just one thing He gave to me
-the courage
to break away
But the tear that I shed
wasn't really for me
‘twas for the many who fear to be free
from the well-trod path
that shackles their souls
and shrouds their destiny
For on the well-trod path
nothing can grow
save for a few dusty schemes
But on the trail you carve yourself
you'll find
MARTY RICKARD BIO
Marty RicKard attended
hi marty, i am grateful that joing this site has exposed me to poetry again. i haven't dealt with poetry for many years. i loved your piece, and could relate quite well. it was beautifully written, with a beautiful message. thank you for sharing such beauty and warmth, best regards, sue thomThanks, Susan: I appreciate your comments and your good work, which I love to read. Marty
Nice piece, Marty. eDear Mr. Rock: Thanks for the nice comment. I am a fan of your work also. Marty
Just love it! I can relate to it. Nice to see poems on here.Dear Jessie: Thanks for your nice comments. Marty RicKard
Marty, I enjoy your work so much; this especially moved me tremendously. You are truly gifted!Dear Judi: Thank you. I enjoy your strong Christian voice, also. Marty RicKard
Marty, well done, an enjoyable poem to read and relate that has a clear strong voice and some wisdom thrown in for measure. Cheers, Ben.Dear Ben: Carving my own path has always worked for me. Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for joining my Fan Club. Best, Marty RicKard
Nice poem. "Wish I had writen it."
can-t tell u how much i loved this.
beautiful poem and very inspiringDear Marcia: Thanks for your nice comments. I hope your path is filled with joy. God Bless, Marty RicKard
Dear Marty, 5 years ago, I named my jewelry business, "Off theBeadin' Path". Now I'm starting a blog and wanted to use a couple lines of poetry about beaten paths, so I found you! I don't know how this works, but thought I would ask you if I could use the last stanza of your beautiful poem for the introduction to my blog, with proper credit written according to your direction? Thank you. Sharon M.





